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don't you get it? 
i can't breathe 
i can't sleep 
my lungs are filling up with tears 
my thoughts are filling up with fears 
swimming round and round and round in circles 
the never ending pattern from day to day 
go to bed tossing and turning 
and slowly making it through the day 
i love you, don't you get that? 
so why can't you show me that you'll be there? 
..be there for me 
so i can sleep 
hearing the heartbeat in your chest 
through your words of comfort 
chasing out the loneliness 
breathing 
...breathing gets harder and harder each day.. 
and maybe someday 
you'll realize that i'm not okay 
but for today 
you won't get it. 
i only wish that it would be okay.. 
Vent. 
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killzonekrissy Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
beautiful!  I think every person on earth knows this feeling :) and it hurts like hell. this is eloquent and wonderfully written!
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Thank you <3
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Jade-Dragoon136 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I pheel it... That's what I pheel
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
:hug:
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bittersweet-ink Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
aw.. ;n; :hug:
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
:huggle: 

I love your new username <3
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Tenshine1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
is everything okay my dear, if you want to talk about it, note me.
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Thanks for the offer..
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Tenshine1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
I always make that offer to my friends and the ones I care about
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
:)
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Tenshine1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Its true...your an awesome artist and a person I would like to call a friend
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
:huggle: thank you. 
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Tenshine1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Your welcome my dear, note me anytime you like
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DuskyLunaFrostBite Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is wonderful...:spinhug: 
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Thank you.
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xLuckyxFridayx13x Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
:huggle:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
:hug:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If you ever need to talk, you can talk to me :hug:
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LittleOvertures Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Thank you. :hug:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome Hun :)
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